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Dark Poetry #3

looking down are we

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

0 posted 2001-07-13 04:06 AM

so i climbed the rock
and saw roses
along with chalk
and turned up noses
take some time within
try this story again
so i climbed the rock
and saw noses
along with talk
and bent back roses
J.L. Koehler

[This message has been edited by carolinadreams (edited 07-13-2001).]

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-07-14 03:58 AM

I had to read this a few times through to catch everything but I'm fairly sure it was all caught.
It's a very interesting piece. It should provoke many thoughts.
Well done.

~AF~

GREMLINS ARE TRYING TO STEAL MY PANTS!!!!!!! *sobs*

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

2 posted 2001-07-15 04:23 PM

Nice.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2001-07-15 07:10 PM

I hope the bent back roses are bent from you and your enjoyment on the mountain!!!
Mankind too quickly turns the coin and looks for the tarnish, instead of stopping to smell the roses. Inhale deeper my friend..
Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

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