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K2001
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since 2001-01-19
Posts 31
Near manchester in England

0 posted 2001-07-12 09:09 PM



I see a small child, alone in the darkness.
Curled in a ball, lost in lifes mess.
Slowly...she pulls her legs nearer...
trying to escape the pain inside her.
Shes so alone, shes scared to cry.
Just incase the ask her why.
How could she ever begin to explain?
The truth behind this secret pain.
She cannot understand the fear she feels.
Nor comprehend the child he steals.
She rocks silentley, a tear in her eye......
In the darkness i watch her die.

"Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi

© Copyright 2001 K.J.Hilton - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-07-13 09:15 AM


Every poem i read of yours i see myself in them, i know how much this hurts, it will never go away & a day will not go by where u don't think of these experiences, but the best thing for me was to put it behind me-i still think about it but i dont let it control my life & someone really special to me helped me through all this--he made me realize that none of this made me less of a person & that i don't have to feel ashamed or anything about--in my darkest times i would hold a pic of him & it made me feel alright--& i keep myself very busy--but everybody's different & i hope u find a good way to deal with all this-- ~hugz~ i'm always here if u need somebody   LOVE ELMO <3
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