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K2001
Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31
Near manchester in England

0 posted 2001-07-12 09:05 PM



Shouting, screaming, crying....crack!

Down she goes, never hits back.

Watching silently they sit.

Watching him, crying at his drunken fit.


She hides the bruises, it was just a game.

Daddy got angry, he wont do it again.

Another cut added to the list,

of wounds hes made with his battered fists.


He kicks and punches never stopping for breath.

holds a knife to her neck, will she bleed to death?

He throws her across the room, stamps on her head.

Children on the staris wishing to be dead.


Blood on the carpet, she must be to blame.

She must be punished and so he punches her again.

"Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi

© Copyright 2001 K.J.Hilton - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-12 09:58 PM


Keeley
This piece really upset me and I'm guessing it was about your own tragic experience??
I hope you have people around you who love you and you can talk to.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-07-12 10:57 PM


surprisee i have also shared this experience with you.  i hate my father and i will never forget or forgive.  i will always wish i could hurt him the way it hurt me.  god, the things you write are my life.  just dont post them all at one time, i feel like i am reliving the last 12 years of my life all over again.
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