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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
"Lost" lost in this world of darkness. lost in this world of pain. Wishing soon this world would end, becuz these feelings drive me insane. Lost in this web of confusion. Lost in this web of sorrow. Trying hard to forget.. praying for it all to end tommorow. Lost and not wanting to be found.. This is how I live today.. Darkness causing confusion.. Depression is here to stay. Lost and not wanting to be found.. This is my life today.. Pain causing sorrow.. My courage runs away. Lost in this game of love. Lost in this game of malady. searching for some kind of hope, but find only cruel piracy. Lost on the plains of despair. Lost on the plains of rage. Looking for loves lost key, so I can escape this Frikin cage. Lost and trying to be found.. looking for my lost prize. Love causing despair.. she watches as my heart cries. Lost and trying to be found.. Looking for that lost prize. Malady causing rage.. she watches as my pride dies.. Lost and can't see a thing, Lost and can't hear a sound.. accepting this horrible fate. punished and never to be found.. [This message has been edited by Rebelious (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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your_babydoll Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 13ohio |
i know what being lost feels like..most of us unlucky ones probably do. maybe it gives us character in the end. ive actually heard that but im not so sure. being lost and alone with noone to turn to. not a good thing thats for sure  i like this a lot |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
That was a great poem, and you expressed it well.  |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
lost...this is a good one, i felt it here, not so much here or here, but here.../Drew/ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
This one really hit home... Awesome piece here...  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Hmmm this one slipped by me somehow--i guess it was "lost" lol--but anyway I'm glad i found it cuz it was great  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I stopped by the Lost and Found Dept, and this is what they gave me. I almost got lost in the flow of this, but then I found myself at the end, and enjoyed the journey. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
i loved the imnage of " cruel piracy"... it reminded of feeling lost..and i feel lost when i feel like somethings been stolen from me...piracy was an excellent way of putting it...hang in tho...it'll pass... " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I know how you feel. Good way of expressing this. Not much more for me to say.  |
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