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LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

0 posted 2001-07-09 10:08 PM

I am lost in the shadows,
I have lost my way,
Never again to see the light of day,
Longing to get out of the shadows,
And into the sun,
Trying to fight a battle,
that cannot be won,
Wondering why it had to be me,
That has to deal with all this misery,
Feeling so much Sorrow,
Feeling so much Pain,
Why do I have to go through this again and again?
Simply trying to make my way,
Into the light,
Starving to find relief,
Struggling to win this fight,
Trying to fight the anger,
Losing my will to win,
I am lost in these dark shadows,
Never to be heard from again.

This one was pretty short but it has a good message i guess!

© Copyright 2001 LadyPeach1 - All Rights Reserved

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2001-07-10 08:20 PM

I liked this one too--I like your style & i like your messages--just reading your poems i think we have a lot in common lol--LOVE ELMO <3

destiny502
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

2 posted 2001-07-11 01:06 PM

i like this..im definately struggling to win this fight. im 17. and sure, we can exchange email

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

3 posted 2001-07-11 10:39 PM

This reminds me a lot of one of my first poems i liked it

Simkus
New Member

since 2001-07-11

Posts 5
North Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-07-11 10:57 PM

that was deep and sincere, I liked it alot. a fight that is impossible to win, yet means 2 much 2 give up. Just wait...

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2001-07-15 03:00 AM

Don't know why, but I do know that the light has a way of seeking you out even amongst the darkest of shadows. Take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-04-24 12:12 PM

I really like this.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

7 posted 2003-05-02 06:23 PM

Thanks alot Bridgette.
Have a good day!
LP1

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