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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-07-09 02:46 PM


When the world gets me down
And I'm feeling so low
I take comfort in the fact
Of something you should know
My thoughts become crystal
And my mind it is clear
For the world is a better place
Only with you here

I wish I could share with you
The feelings I get
From the very first day
That you and I met
I love you completely
I love you so true
I've never loved anybody
The way I love you

So please my dear angel
Don't leave me be
For a life without you
Only bleakness I see
I'll always be here
I reiterate
Whith an offering of love
To you, my soul mate

G. A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-09 06:38 PM


This was so wonderfully written, such a beautiful picture you painted with your words, a great dedication.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-07-10 01:19 AM


Ahhhhh yes beautiful indeed! Lovely peice written for your soulmate. But I have a question....... how do you truely know she is your soulmate??  Not that I doubt you or anything.  I am just curious

Mags

Don't fear your tears!

G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
3 posted 2001-07-10 09:18 AM


Suetang: Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked this piece. Do take care yourself.

Dark Kisses: And I thank you too Mags. Tell me, why did you change your name and drop the "within" from the end of it? To answer your question, yes, I firmly believe that she is my soul mate. I've got more than enough facts and evidence to support that claim and was told just the same by a psychic once a long time ago. But the bottom line is that this piece is nothing more than wishful thinking on my part like all of my other love poems are. You see, I'm doomed to be everybody's "friend" and no bodies lover. That's been the way of things all my life and no matter how hard I try, it doesn't change. So you see, my love poems are nothing more than the woeful dreams of a very sad and lonely old soul. But at least you guys like them and that makes me feel good.

Thanks again Mags and do take care!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).
4 posted 2001-07-10 10:34 AM


Wishful or not your words are wonderful!!
...and all of us love, all of us feel, all of us will get what we feel in return it is simply up to time to deside when and where....
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
5 posted 2001-07-10 12:32 PM


Mr. Webb, to answer your question :  I dropped the *Within* for the fact I lost my password and changed my server, so instead of going through the run around, I just created a new name.  Simple enough eh? lol
     Anyways, about the soulmate thing.  I truely understand where you are coming from on that.  I too seem to be everyones friend.  Plus when I do find a man, I have the tendecy to run from the love.  Not because I dont want it, just for the mere fact it is hard for me to trust.  I love your poetry, whether it be wishful thinking or not.  You have a true love inside of you and sooner or later you will find the one that is right for you. (now if only I can believe that for myself   )  Keep your head up and never give up.  She's out there somewhere!

Take care,
Mags  

Don't fear your tears!

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
6 posted 2001-07-11 10:51 PM


awww this is really sweet and really cute.  i enjoyed it alot!!  
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2001-07-15 02:57 AM


Wishful thinking or not, one thing for sure she is out there, don't ever doubt that. As for Dark Kisses, well tell her that sometimes you just know!  

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2001-07-17 09:57 AM


I always enjoy your work (when I have a chance to read). As for just being everyones friend......I believe friendship is the basis for love. Don't give up on those relationships, caring grows from a small seeds. Trust is something that opens the heart and trust takes time.

It has been a pleasure as always.

Marilyn

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes ha

G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
9 posted 2001-07-18 07:56 PM


Thank you all so much for your responces. I suppose you all are right, there's worse things to be other than "just a friend". It just sucks to have that thrown in you face every single time, that's all. Thanks again.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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