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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282


0 posted 2001-07-07 07:44 PM


Everyday I look into the mirror,
to try to find my identity,
I try find the person I was,
I try to find the real me,

I hide behind the shadows,
But I never give up to find the light,
I wish everything could be better,
I wish I could make everything right,

Tired of being angry,
Tired of being Confused,
Tired of trying to fight a battle,
Cause I know I will always lose,

Angry at this world,
Irate at the pace it is in,
I know I have lost the fight,
Cause in this world you will never win,

Even though you don't think I do,
I am a person and I have feelings too,

Overwhelmed by this madness,
Not a friend to be by my side,
I just want to run away,
I want to run and hide,

Wish I could sweep away this horror,
This terror of being scared,
No one to help me with my problems,
Cause it seems like nobody, not one person cares...

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destiny502
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57
OH
1 posted 2001-07-07 11:43 PM


not having anyone, being alone in life..i may be young but i can relate to all this. i just need someone to rescue me..someone to listen to me and help me. and the one person that could do that for me is basically gone.
K2001
Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31
Near manchester in England
2 posted 2001-07-09 10:48 AM


I truely believe that no matter who you are or where you are there is somebody somewhere who will always be there for you helping you through. You say you are 15? This is great honey, keep it up, it touched me. believe in yourself and you will make it through anything and everything. xxxx

"Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi

K2001
Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31
Near manchester in England
3 posted 2001-07-09 10:48 AM


I truely believe that no matter who you are or where you are there is somebody somewhere who will always be there for you helping you through. You say you are 15? This is great honey, keep it up, it touched me. believe in yourself and you will make it through anything and everything. xxxx

"Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi

Fallen Angel of Darkness
Junior Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 26
Among the Shadows
4 posted 2001-07-09 11:15 AM


Beautifully written!  The despondant feelings are wonderfully interwoven with your words!

I hope you find the light, but sometimes it takes a long time (trust me, i know)  

Always remember, the light switch never seems to be in the place you remembered it to be.  You might find it in one of the most unusual places.

Hang in there, hon.  

~* Megs *~

I love the lines some men use to get us into bed. "Please, I'll only put it in for a minute." What am I, a microwave?
— Beverly Mickins

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