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Addiction |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Change be inevitable as time continues on... Drugs...of any kind kill nothing more than the person that you are and will be... altered states of mind make nothing more than brains of wanting mush... Euphoria obtained thru false fame is nothing more than fake bliss that ends leaving you with nothing more than you started... veins left hollowed from pushing liquid forms of happiness leave nothing more than confussion, depression, and everlasting addiction... addiction once the drug is gone leaves nothing more than wanting misery... So take this silver tongued addicts words to heart... come empty handed and leave just the same. "There is an alter ego which |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Ali This poem sent a chill through my spine as I can only imagine how much drugs must destroy your soul and being. I hope life is good for you now. Take care......Sue p.s. Thanks so much for taking the time to read my poem, it was much appreciated. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
How well I know the feelings of "the empty shell, desperation and helplessness" Write on..... Good job One Day At a Time |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Oh, wow. What a message. A deep and dark piece, my friend. Nicely done. Sincerely, Titus |
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*Satan'sFallenAngel* New Member
since 2002-01-21
Posts 5 |
Very unkind to those that find themselves in the throws of an addiction, however, it is a very good point as well as a wonderfully vivid and well written work. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
you have me wanting more and more. Keep it up. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
addiction once the drug is gone leaves nothing more than wanting misery... So take this silver tongued addicts words to heart... come empty handed and leave just the same. A most appropriate warning and a very fine write. I know from where you speak. |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Everyone needs their addiction.... Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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