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Tasin Ray
Junior Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 11
TX, USA

0 posted 2001-07-02 04:12 PM



Enclosed from society
to create a reality
to fill this empty space
of time, again to end

   hold me now
     but wait till tomorrow
     hold me down
     drown away my sorrow


They say that these eyes
are the windows to my soul
deaf to my own cries
lost in life's balck hole

   you can save
     you can create me
     you have given me all I see

     so please hold me
     shape and mold me
     so that I can be...


Because I fell in love with the green of the earth and the stars up in the sky.
And I saw the flowers through their birth and felt the rain fall from heaven's sky.
And I saw the world that was made to unfold my own destiny.
With you right there with open arms to guide me through this raging sea.

please... hold me now
                don't wait until tomorrow
                  take me now
                    away from this sorrow



"In this very breath that we take now lies the secret that all great teachers try to tell us."
                         -Gem Whitefield

© Copyright 2001 Tasin Gem Ray - All Rights Reserved
Necro Draconis
Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115

1 posted 2001-07-03 09:53 PM


Very nicley done!

Let Nature be your guide, and one will never get lost.

LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

2 posted 2001-07-07 12:32 PM


I have fallen in love with your work.  I have read three of your poems and you have just such a powerful, amazing, and rare talent.  Great job once again!!

LadyPeach1

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