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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
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Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-07-01 02:04 PM


My love dreams in quiet slumber
Of all that she perceives as fair
Her head upon the pillow resting
Bathed within her raven hair

Behind her eyes the scene unfolds
And plays before her in the night
Would that I could share her dream
And be a party to her sight

Of what she dreams, I cannot say
So, I will let her dreaming be
Though I am saddened by the thought
I know she does not dream of me

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

© Copyright 2001 Darren Lausa - All Rights Reserved
Phreak
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since 2001-04-11
Posts 26

1 posted 2001-07-01 07:54 PM


Or maybe she is dreaming of you, like you said you do not know.  This is a wonderful poem, excellent...

write on!

~phreak

"I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright" (3EB)

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
2 posted 2001-07-02 03:07 AM


Phreak,

I can only hope she does.
Thanks,
Ian

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

esclandre
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since 2001-06-11
Posts 62
Northern California
3 posted 2001-07-02 01:22 PM


can only hope... that's better than KNOWING the opposite! best wishes,

Esclandre

Fallen Angel of Darkness
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Among the Shadows
4 posted 2001-07-02 01:45 PM


What a sad thought!  I hope she really is though.  Wonderfully written piece.  

~* Megs *~

I love the lines some men use to get us into bed. "Please, I'll only put it in for a minute." What am I, a microwave?
— Beverly Mickins

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
5 posted 2001-07-03 02:43 AM


Thank you all. Your words are kind but when all is said and done, it's time for me to move on. Hope is a fine dream but one must finally wake.
Hope is the gravestone of despair.
Ian

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

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