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Necro Draconis
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0 posted 2001-06-29 11:21 PM


The darkness surrounds me as I penetrate my feelings into its’ emptiness
An emptiness that can only be filled in the depths of my own soul
It is an emptiness that fuels me, but yet holds me back
Suffocates me into oblivion, until I secrete everything which I hold dear
Leaving me in a world all to familiar
A world of lost hopes and dreams
A world in which I may never escape
A world that I have become to be known as reality


© Copyright 2001 Ryan Kruse - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-06-30 06:36 AM


Excellent expression...James
Fallen Angel of Darkness
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Among the Shadows
2 posted 2001-07-01 02:30 AM


A truly haunting piece that finds its way into many people's realities.  Nice work.

~* Megs *~

"It's only after we lost everything that we are free to do anything. " -- Tyler Durton, Fight Club

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