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The Price Of Rage
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The Price Of Rage |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Anger , dark thoughts , sharp and raw rising crimson tide Power surging uncontrolled reason cast aside Action , primal instinct screams choked off , swallowed hot scalding , burning curse of fools , stomach tied in knots Wrenching , twisting , tortured nerves weapons honed with skill focused inward face the beast snarling for the kill Tightly clenched cold sweaty hands forfeit this to thee Nothing I've seen as of yet's worth this toll on me |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Agreed - There's something to be said for hermitage, isn't there?...  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nan? In Dark? Oh my...  Moose: Liking this one...good flow, good images...good work...  KI am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
wow...this was sooooo good. yay for you! luv the post. -fear- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
whew...and I think I have met my Armageddon, Doc? Can you advise a course of treatment? Rage, is NOT fun. You said it perfectly. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...and the rage goes on... This was an absolute wonderment for my day...wonderfully written and expressed. Until..ali "There is an alter ego which |
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