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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2001-06-26 01:08 PM


If I looked deep into your eyes
And held your hand so tight
Then explained how much I love you
Would the sun still shine bright?
Would the stars still glimmer
Through the white of your eyes
Would the sun still shine over me
Drying up the tears I once cried
Would the ocean still look peaceful
With no storms in the way
Knowing I have these feelings
Would you run or would you stay?
Would the rainbows still sparkle
With all the colors of your heart
With the gold at the end
Knowing they'll never part
           *SIGH*
I know I must tell you
How much you mean to me
With the warmth of your soul
My heart I must free
So take this as my confession
Or my vow to love thee
Watching the love blossom
Is all I want to see

Don't fear your tears!

© Copyright 2001 Mags - All Rights Reserved
baerlon
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2001-06-28 01:23 AM


Oh how i wish i could do this one thing you speak of.  This is a wonderful poem, and touched me right.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2001-06-29 05:08 AM


This is lovely!    And the sigh was just in the right spot - I too sighed then!  Take care  

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2001-06-29 06:05 AM


Don't spend your life wondering! I enjoyed this one, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Fallen Angel of Darkness
Junior Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 26
Among the Shadows
4 posted 2001-07-09 11:06 AM


When this situation arises, it is always difficult to just say what you are feeling.  It has always been my philosophy, however, to just go for what you want and admit your feelings.  I'd rather be let down (or shot down depending on the guy) early and have the time to heal than let it drag out wondering and never quite knowing...

I hope you find the right time and courage to tell him.  Good luck.

Oh, by the way, your poem was wonderful    

~* Megs *~


I love the lines some men use to get us into bed. "Please, I'll only put it in for a minute." What am I, a microwave?
— Beverly Mickins

[This message has been edited by Fallen Angel of Darkness (edited 07-09-2001).]

illusion
Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

5 posted 2001-07-10 11:42 AM


I like this - good luck with the telling.  
Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
6 posted 2001-07-11 10:54 PM


so i dated this guy, my current boyfriend actually.  and when i first feel in love with him i didnt want or know how to tell him, but i did at first it was rough and we broke up a few times because he was scared.  but now after a year of i love yous we are so happy.  so if you feel this way trust your heart it usually wont mislead you
Simkus
New Member
since 2001-07-11
Posts 5
North Carolina, USA
7 posted 2001-07-11 11:04 PM


That beautifully decribes the way i feel about one of my best friends.  But as the years pass the further we get.
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
8 posted 2001-07-15 03:02 AM


I still like it!  

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


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