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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
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0 posted 2001-06-24 10:53 PM


The fear of becoming one of the others,
In the darkness of this world,
Wandering around like all the rest of the lost souls,
Trying to find their way out,
Some screaming out in horror,
And I fear that will soon be me,
Losing my sight,
Losing my strength,
The terror of the thoughts of becoming one of them,
Makes my dreams fall away,
I have too many battles left to fight,
I just want to lay down and die,
I want to forget this ever happened...

[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (edited 06-25-2001).]

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mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814

1 posted 2001-06-25 04:03 AM


Yes, I know the feeling.  Well done.
fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
2 posted 2001-06-25 07:00 AM


eh that feeling sucks pretty badly, but you did a good job describing it.  
-fear-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2001-06-25 09:21 PM


Hugs   You have described it well...

K

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