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Phreak Junior Member
since 2001-04-11
Posts 26 |
Slide… Down the surface of things Forget… All of your shames Remember… Your demons run faster than you Pretend… That you are somebody else Realize… Somebody else doesn’t want to be you Dance… Around the truth who you really are And when you cant take it anymore And when you cant open up the door And when your screams become to loud to hear And when you realize there is no one near You’ll see that you aren’t that bad You’ll see that you’re all you have You’ll see the light to the tunnel of hope Just pray there’s someone left to throw down the rope. |
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Alysia182 Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 19CT |
Hey...that was really good! I liked your technique.  |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Excellent words of advise here. Now what were you trying to say here?  Just kidding!! Good work!! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very cool phrasing and message. I like your style too. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
and whos is it that ALWAYS is there to throw that lifeline? God, of course! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
wow this was really kool! i loved the part that said "remember...your demons run faster then you" that has to be the best part in my opinion. thanks for sharin, this was awesome. tis goin in my library. -fear- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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