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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
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Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2001-06-19 05:28 PM


Pain we under go
Hurt we all must know
Sorrow makes us cry
Death we all fear
Fear consumes are being
Sadness plauges us more and more

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

© Copyright 2001 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
1 posted 2001-06-19 05:35 PM


Unfortunately this is true...no matter how much we try to cover it. Believe me, I know.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

2 posted 2001-06-19 08:57 PM


Very short, but very true.  
Good job

LadyPeach1

BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

3 posted 2001-06-20 03:39 PM



Very clear isolations, I dig.
What scares me about this write is that is has no bottom- reminds of that dream of constantly falling but always staying still.  

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
4 posted 2001-07-29 12:31 PM


good  write../Drew/
Jessica
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5 posted 2001-07-29 04:59 PM


Awesome!!  
moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
6 posted 2001-07-31 02:23 AM


Fear consumes are being
Sadness plauges us more and more

how true.. but i guess inspite of this.. we can go on.. we can still believe in joy.. as nikki giovanni would attest..  

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