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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 80
Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2001-06-19 05:26 PM


Blood sucking beasts roam
Are you afraid?
I am not
Do you think they really walk the face of the Earth?
They do, don't be scared...
Cold they maybe be to the touch, but arm in my heart they are
Creatures of the night
I wish to join, to live forever
Existing in the shadows, the dark cornners of people minds...
Feeding off their beings

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

© Copyright 2001 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
1 posted 2001-06-19 06:14 PM


A very dark, macabre, morbid poem.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

2 posted 2001-06-20 03:41 PM


be careful
Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
3 posted 2001-07-29 12:47 PM


this is great shkit...no no hammer dont hurt them../Drew/
Jessica
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4 posted 2001-07-29 09:28 PM


Very morbid - Not my favorite type of poem to be honest but you did very well with it...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2001-07-31 01:19 AM


I wish to join, to live forever
Existing in the shadows, the dark cornners of people minds...

you know, this may be a metaphor for needing attention or affection.. like, the need to be accepted.. i don't know, maybe it's just me.. anyway, i think it's good..

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