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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-06-17 09:57 PM



Disease

Beat me,
degrade me,
do as you please,
I'm at your mercy,
I'm on my knees

Hate me,
cut me,
corrupt my memories,
crucify without nails
in cruelest degrees

Rape me,
taint me,
strip a heart to freeze,
warp the mind...
I share your disease

By Melissa P. Monette


© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2001-06-18 02:39 PM


Melissa, very dark writing sounds like a lot of emotions boiling here, but releasing them is part of the healing produce. Thanks for sharing.  

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
2 posted 2001-06-21 05:46 PM


Wow.....that is extemely strong....oh yea, it was really though. It seems to catch your attention.
-Neala

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