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Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-06-17 02:29 PM

wrote this one lastnight... enjoy

In love I once was.....
since then I have wisend up.
For now I know love as a joke.
I am glad from this dream I have fineally woke.

I looked into her heart which was dark like coal,
now there is a graveyard in my soul.

That nightmare is now my reality.
Now all I feel is pain.
I know now how her love kills.
I know now how hell feels.

Her love has a huge freaking toll.
for now there is a graveyard in my soul.

Now all I can do is pray.
Pray to god that i will find "true" love.
I hope I find the real thing.
For then I know I will never feel the devils phang.

I have drank from loves sacred bowl,
and now inbeded is a graveyard in my soul.

Shadowdean
Junior Member

since 2001-06-11

Posts 11
Silver Spring, MD

1 posted 2001-06-17 04:53 PM

"
I have drank from loves sacred bowl,
and now inbeded is a graveyard in my soul.
"

This was the line for me...talk about a kick in the head.......

"Victory can be anticipated, but not assured"

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

2 posted 2001-06-19 05:47 PM

I often feel that way too.
My soul has its own graves, way too many to count.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

3 posted 2001-06-22 10:08 AM

Hey ...

This was precisely how i felt exactly 2 years ago... I can still remember the pain ... The death of love sure is hell.

Great poem you have here ... I think you have captured your emotions well.

I do hope you feel better soon. Take care.

~verve

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

4 posted 2001-07-29 12:36 PM

this is good ../Drew/

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-30-2001).]

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

5 posted 2001-07-29 12:46 PM

Yep Been here also. Isnt it strange how you read in books how beautiful love is. Yet actually having it isnt even close to what you thought it was going ot be. I havent given up on love but I do know that love comes with alot of pain just like everything else in our lives. There are always going to be pro's and con's. Nice piece here, I enjoyed it!

Mags

Don't fear your tears!

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

6 posted 2001-07-29 09:33 PM

Love can be hell but when you find the right person it is the most beautiful thing any human being can possibly experience. Great job of showing the down-side of love...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

7 posted 2001-07-29 09:45 PM

Love can never be good...Only time love can be good is when your tottally ignorent about the other person... Bliss and ingnorence... When you are with someone for awhile, feelings that you never had before start to arise, stealing your breath at moments... angering you even more... Maybe I'm wrong, but this is my point of veiw.. Maybe one day I'll fall into ingonorent love again

Trust me I loved it.. then I woke up..now I both fear it and yearn for it... kinda ironic. Well thanks for the replys.

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