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Shadowdean
Junior Member

since 2001-06-11

Posts 11
Silver Spring, MD

0 posted 2001-06-11 05:52 PM

Noon turns to dark feeding time in inner city parks
Faite gave my soul a heavy weight thats carried on my heart
Holding bloody knifes before heaven's gate
screaming out "let me, forgive my sins, actions burning let your love clense my skin"
Blessed with good soul that rotted with a hole.
Misdirected through life but always respected
I'm muddy cause I do my work in the dirt and mud
Shedding blood when I really want to spread love
A vessle possed by the rage of demon
I know the truth is in front of me, but I'm not seein'
My reality is just grays and black
Fists, gunfights, and corner crack.
But I'm on this path and there's no turning back.
Just another day to my struggle,
rebellion on my lips but the instution got me in a muzzle.

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

1 posted 2001-06-11 06:10 PM

"
Just another day to my struggle,
rebellion on my lips but the instution got me in a muzzle
"

Nice first post.
What an end!
Congratulations.
Keep posting

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

2 posted 2001-06-15 04:22 PM

Well, this is really bleak...a real Modernist theme. It really reflects a dark world here.

Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.
-Publilus Syrus

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

3 posted 2001-06-15 08:09 PM

That was a really really great first post! You did an excellent job. Wonderful poem!
LadyPeach1

Shadowdean
Junior Member

since 2001-06-11

Posts 11
Silver Spring, MD

4 posted 2001-06-15 11:43 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it.

"Victory can be anticipated, but not assured"

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-26 01:33 PM

Wow.. really great first post. These are very deep thoughts. Much enjoyed. Welcome

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

6 posted 2001-06-28 01:27 AM

i look forward to reading more of your work

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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