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The Twilight is My Robe (fourth of five)
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The Twilight is My Robe (fourth of five) |
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Lethe Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 36Blackforrest |
THE TWILIGHT IS MY ROBE Unto you I whisper The wildest dreams In the coldness of night Shrouded in crystals Through a frosty dusk Souls of the fullmoon awaits Their shadows ablaze We are all bending Our tired leaves over your empty shell In the sign of true esteem Are you beloved lord Sighing deep under these waterfalls? The birds of the sun Separates these dark clouds While the winds of winter sleeps gently around I am sworn to the oath To breathe... At the waters I dwell The waves are still whispering Ancient lullabies I die.... While our mystic brothers still seek Under your command I will obey In my vision You are the embodiment of pure freedom But through my eyes you are made of stone [This message has been edited by Lethe (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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TheGreatMango Junior Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 17Louisana, USA |
i find this poem much more poweful then the other one i read.. about your thoughts on what guys think. |
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TheGreatMango Junior Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 17Louisana, USA |
correction...sorry my computer was mesed up apparently it showed YOU writing bout the guys on my computer i dunno why |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
*sigh* this poem makes me miss winter even more,it's so beautiful....this line struck me "The birds of the sun Separates these dark clouds While the winds of winter sleeps gently around I am sworn to the oath To breathe... " i've been gone for a few months and haven't kept up with my favorite poets,but i'm doing that now and your work is just as excellent as i remember it to be. sammi much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
good write.../Drew/ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very good...  |
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