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ilph
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 78


0 posted 2001-06-09 12:15 PM


shut the door on the world
and im in hinge heaven

theres a handle too

doors
keep in me
keep out you

and i know i have
my flaws
but i do
i love my doors

much applause
then for
doors

please close the door
when you leave

me


[This message has been edited by ilph (edited 06-09-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 ilph - All Rights Reserved
allis4angel
Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal
1 posted 2001-06-11 04:22 PM


As simple as that.
Nice way to keep the "door closed".
I liked the idea.
Keep writing.


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