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allis4angel
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal

0 posted 2001-06-07 06:23 PM


Close your eyes
Forget all the pain you may feel
Seat back
And don’t open your eyes

Can you see the one you love?
He is coming close, isn’t it?
So good to feel his arms holding you
How is it possible?
He’s saying the things
You waited to hear for so long
What about the kiss?
His lips taste the way you dreamed
Your bodies seems to know
Each other so well
You feel so good
Reading in his eyes
You both are meant to be

Now you see everything dark, don’t you?
Something his falling thru your face
I tell you, tears, that’s what it is
I told you,
You shouldn’t open your eyes

Believe me,
I understand what you feel right now
And the taste of the tears so well
I always try not to open mine
‘Cause when I do it
You’re not there anymore

When my eyes are closed
I decide who gets in
I’m sure you do the same, don’t you?
So,
There’s no place for three
And I know who must give up
Me

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ilph
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 78

1 posted 2001-06-09 12:20 PM


allis

this is really good work, i think
i especially like the last stanza

you put alot into this
and i get alot out

thanks

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