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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-06-05 11:06 PM




Today will be the day
When the two of us
Begin our lives together
We have been apart for so long
Living separt, Living our own lives
This is the day we first make that giant step and join our worlds together
Focusing on the two of us
Making lifes long journey holding one another's hand
I longed for the days, when i  would fall asleep in your arms and wake craddled in that very position
That day has finally come, A year
Later, the first day of the rest of our lives

*Dedicated to my Kindred Spirit*
*My Guardian Angel, My forever Love*
Danyel L. Azar
6/5/01
11:05 p.m.



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

© Copyright 2001 Danyel L. Azar - All Rights Reserved
kansas-jim
Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 22
Willits,Ca
1 posted 2001-06-06 12:35 PM


Hits home hard  moon. That will be me soon. Very nice
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-06-06 07:06 AM


Temptress*Moon,
what passion what promise in this poem.

write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

3 posted 2001-06-06 11:20 AM


Such a beautiful, heart felt poem!  I liked it ALOT!!  Keep up the great work.

LadyPeach1

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