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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282


0 posted 2001-06-05 09:52 PM


The love I once had for you,
Was as beautiful as a rose
when it first bloomed.

The love I once had for you,
Was like the first time I
saw your sweet face.

The love I once had for you,
Is like a mother recieving
her newborn child.

The love I once had for you,
Has now vanished in what seems
like thin air.

Cause you have broken my heart,
And made my emotions swell inside me,
I no longer can say "I love you"
and mean it.

I wonder day by day,
what step I took that was wrong,
I wonder day by day,
Why we didn't get along.

The wondering will still continue,
Until this mystery is solved,
Because it was you that I once loved....


NOTE:  this poem was ALSO written for my mother!!

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Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
1 posted 2001-06-05 11:09 PM


WOW! This was Amazing
Excellent Write!
Temptress*Moon


I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-06-06 07:27 AM


LadyPeach,
waht a double whammy!
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

3 posted 2001-06-06 10:52 AM


My goodness!  I didn't realize everyone would like that poem so much!  I actually didn't really care for that one as much as I did the others.  But thank you so so much!
LadyPeach1

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