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LadyPeach1
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0 posted 2001-06-04 11:05 PM



I waited for you.
For you, I would wait forever...
You told me that you loved me,
So, I said I would wait forever.

You told me you would never leave me,
Once again, I will wait forever.
I wanted you to be with me always.
So, I said I would wait forever.

Now I am sitting by my window,
Wondering.........
What ever happen to that promise you made?
And I remember I said,
I would wait forever.  
So now I sit, Still waiting for the day
When you will come back to me.

Cause for you, I would wait forever...

You left me, now my heart is broken,
I promised I would wait forever.
You never came back  
So now I must spend my life wondering why,
Why you left me?

If you were still here, I would still be here waiting,

Because for you, I would wait Forever...


[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (edited 06-05-2001).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-06-05 09:00 AM


LadyPeach,
Good poem, forever is a long time.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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Very sad poem hun....i agree...forever is a very long time. Good job tho  
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3 posted 2001-06-06 01:56 PM


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4 posted 2001-06-07 12:41 PM


Awe this is excactly how I feel about my boyfriend right now---I'm still waiting   Another great poem <3 LOVE ELMO

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