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qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2002-02-04 02:29 AM

HEART BEAT!

My heart only beats your name.
No other song will do.
It's empty without your love,
won't rest 'til it has you!
Without you it's lost,
and lonliness eats me away.
No piece fits the puzzle.
If only you could stay.
It's like my heart is black,
lacking any color.
It was only happy with you,
won't settle for any other.
With you it was content,
comfortable and safe.
No one can compare,
and this feeling can't be erased.
Once you've won the lottery,
it's hard to go back to poor.
And once you opened my heart to love,
I just can't close that door.
It's broken in a million pieces,
a simple band-aid won't do.
Couldn't bring myself to tell my every feeling,
you never even had a clue.
Will my heart get over it,
if you choose to leave for good?
Do you think it can open again,
and love another like it should?

ELMO

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-02-04 09:55 AM

Change is difficult and letting go is even harder...you expressed your feelings very well and i know exactly what your going through. I hope things work out alright and i hope that no doors need to be closed on a love that you were so open to...::hugs::

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2002-02-04 01:56 PM

I agree, very well expressed here. When one leaves your side it is very difficult to let go. But keep looking forward, ya never know what might be ahead!

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2002-02-04 02:20 PM

Thanx so much you guys! I have found someone new who I really enjoy spending time with--It will be 1 month for us on Feb.13th

& I can only hope that I can find the same love with him as I had with my last--Thanx again for replying!

ELMO

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-02-08 03:18 PM

Elmo..... come here...

Once again, a wonderful read.

Loved it as usual. Glad you've found happiness with someone, my friend.

Good for you... two!

Bye. Again, great job!

The One, The Only... The Titus.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

5 posted 2002-02-09 04:39 AM

Thanx so much Titus

Yea I've never been happier!! Maybe I'll be posting happy poems now--lol

ELMO

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

6 posted 2002-03-16 12:14 PM

hey this poem is so nice.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

7 posted 2002-03-16 02:58 PM

Thanx Aries!

ELMO

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (03-16-2002 02:59 PM).]

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

8 posted 2002-03-17 01:44 PM

I'm so glad you have found happiness, i know I have found my sunshine, we will be together for 2 years in November! I'm so excited cause i don't know many 15 year olds that have relationships like me. Good luck!
LP1

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

9 posted 2002-03-17 05:10 PM

Thanx Lady--Yea we have been together for like 2 months now

Well good luck with you, I'm glad you found someone you can be happy with too!

ELMO

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2002-03-18 07:36 PM

Hey, well done. I enjoyed reading this, it lets me know that love does exist out there. you brightened my day, thanx!

Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul.
- The Angry Bard

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

11 posted 2002-03-18 09:35 PM

Thanx Baroni! Yes, it truly does exist & I'm glad I can help you to see that!

ELMO

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

12 posted 2002-03-22 01:49 AM

Its so nice and it made my heart filled with happiness to know that things can work out somehow in life still..... great piece dearie

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

13 posted 2002-03-22 01:51 PM

Thanx creature!! There's some1 special out there for everyone--you just gotta find them I guess & even if it takes you your whole life to find them I believe it's worth it!

ELMO

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

14 posted 2002-03-22 10:17 PM

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
~ The Night Owl

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

15 posted 2002-03-23 12:37 PM

Cute!

ELMO

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

16 posted 2002-03-26 02:02 PM

you just wrote my heart ...
thanx for your offering of this poem.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

17 posted 2002-03-26 05:51 PM

You too huh! At least we know we aren't the only ones--lol--Thanx!!

ELMO

Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

18 posted 2002-04-05 02:59 AM

Well, i liked this peice alot... and elmo.. if this doesn't work out... this new person... I am always looking for a nice poetic lady in my life

im serious about that too.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

19 posted 2002-04-06 10:39 PM

Thanx Rebelious!!--ur too sweet!--I'll keep u in mind!!!

ELMO

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