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ashleyms
New Member
since 2001-06-03
Posts 1
Australia

0 posted 2001-06-03 08:09 AM



How can it be
that one simple word
can mean so much
can change my life
for ever

How can it be
that one simple word
can stir such emotions
can make me feel
so happy

I still can't believe
you said that one word
the smile on your face
I knew it meant
so much

I still can't believe
you said that one word
when I knelt on one knee
and asked the question
will you

One three letter word
the only word
I wanted to hear
that word
was yes.


~ Ashley 2001 ~

© Copyright 2001 ashleyms - All Rights Reserved
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2001-06-03 08:15 AM


Ashley...

all I can say
is
what i feel
which was
yes.

forever.

With much love,

~ Tara ~ xxxxx

PS:  this first poem of yours encapsulates so much... thank you... I am so lucky to have you in my life... I love you :-)

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-06-03 10:06 AM


Romance on the net, how lovely. ashleyms, Welcome to passions, I hope your stay here is long and happy.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2001-06-03 10:07 AM


BTW,
I wish you happy, I'm an Aussie too.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2001-06-03 03:58 PM



Yep, that word will do it every time!! Welcome to that family. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Please check your email for a special message.  

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

5 posted 2001-06-04 01:49 AM


Lovely...welcome to passions!

K

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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
6 posted 2001-06-04 02:42 AM


Beautiful job here. Welcome to Passions!
I really enjoyed this poem! Hope to see more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2001-06-05 02:30 AM


Especially nice to welcome a fellow Aussie to Passions, A wonderful entrance, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
8 posted 2001-06-05 10:13 AM


WeLcOmE tO pAsSiOnS!!!!!!!  

Hehehehe welcome aboard!!!! Isnt it hard to believe that one single word could even change the course of a persons life??? AMazing huh??? Great first post and i hope you enjoy it here! I look forward to reading more of your work  

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