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Dark Poetry #3

Losses

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-29 12:02 PM

The general stands at the table,
Looking at what appears to be a paper,
When he glances up-
I spot a sadness in his eyes,
The remorse is felt for the loss,
Many have sacrificed their lives,
Yet many others share the same fate,
But death comes swift,
Leaving the dependent,
Homeless,
This is the answer-
For trees,
In the 21st century.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-06-02 09:38 AM

an unusual comparison, but a good write *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-06-03 03:25 AM

Thank you wynter. I thought I should make something different. The ending throws everyone off.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2001-06-03 09:04 AM

Xeonox,
the ending does indeed throw everyone off, but I liked it just the same...it made me smile.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2001-06-03 10:25 PM

I am glad to hear that even though I am thousands of miles away from you people, I can make someone smile.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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