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Snowdwen
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-05-23 10:37 PM


I remember when you fell in love
I could not believe...

that it was not with me
I sent a secret prayer up above
and put my heart away

so that you could be free
and I know right now your broken in two

but.....
did you know my heart's
been broken since that day I've met you

"You live you learn and life moves on"



© Copyright 2001 Michell - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2001-05-24 01:50 AM


Sometimes all you can do is let go and hope they see...
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2001-05-24 04:16 AM


I know this in some way. You have conveyed it well here.

Snowdwen
Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana
3 posted 2001-05-24 04:37 AM


Thank you both.. Not much to say about this pome.. I know you both know what I was feeling here, but all isn't lost.. its just not the right time.. for this to start.

"You live you learn and life moves on"



BitterSmoke
Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

4 posted 2001-05-24 04:12 PM



well spoken and god knows I relate.

Snowdwen
Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana
5 posted 2001-05-24 04:19 PM


Thank you BitterSmoke..
I'm glad you like it.. I am also sorry that you've ben down this path,
But rember this.. what hasn't happend yet doesn't mean its not ment to be. For the best is yet to come. *smile*

"You live you learn and life moves on"



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