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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-05-23 08:20 PM


With dragon's tooth
And blistered scales
I'll cast the spell
That always fails
A spell of love
Is what I've wrought
Although to find it
I have not
But I'll keep trying
This is true
Until I gain
The love of you
To win your heart
Once more I'll try
But to fail
This time I'll die
For I'll be left
All power drained
An empty spirit
A heart that's stained
Yet I still climb
This mountain high
With what magic
Left have I
And I will shout
Upon this peak
Because your love
Is all I seek
The Gods will hear
My incantation
But I fear
With some frustration
That through my bleeding
Heart I've poured
My prayers again
Will be ignored
So please my love
Give me a chance
Take my hand
Let's have this dance
For all I've said
To you is true
Especially the fact
That I love you
With no more words
Now left to tell
I stand alone
And cast the spell


G. A. WEBB


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't




[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 05-23-2001).]

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BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

1 posted 2001-05-23 09:29 PM



  
It is very hard to weave a spell of love.  
Not as simple as it perhaps was.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2001-05-25 10:51 PM


What a wonderful twist this had, with the hint of Wiccan in it.  I really enjoyed this one!  
Isis

*Enlightenment is within all things*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-05-25 11:33 PM


I love this spell you cast in words....nice rhyming and kept me intrigued 'til the end

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
4 posted 2001-05-28 05:00 PM


Thanks all. I thought this was kind of an interesting one I had fun play'n with. Thanks again!

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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