soul into the velvet night steals

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Dark Poetry #3

soul into the velvet night steals

poni
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 21
Nebraska

0 posted 2001-05-21 01:45 AM

she stood at a window sash
hand at throat
eyes aghast
soul stealing through the velvet night
hollow cries echoing
under sirens screaming shrill
raising the little hairs on her arms and neck

she lost her soul
she lost her self

hollow core
shallow grave to fill
collapsing inward imploding
weightless
...now on notes of sirens shrill
carried onward through the gates of hell

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2001-05-21 02:06 AM

you are a my kind of writer. I enjoyed the ending.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

2 posted 2001-05-21 07:50 AM

Grand write...thank you for a wonderful first morning read with my coffee!!
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2001-05-21 04:19 PM

hollow core
shallow grave to fill
collapsing inward imploding
weightless
...now on notes of sirens shrill
carried onward through the gates of hell

welcome to Passions, a hair rasiing read. especially loved the last verse.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
like they never exist"

nicky wire

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-05-26 12:04 PM

soul stealing..I like that thought
Welcome

~Wynter..

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

BitterSmoke
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 54

5 posted 2001-05-26 02:44 PM

excellent

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

6 posted 2001-05-27 07:44 AM

enjoyed the read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-05-27 04:56 PM

Wow! Excellent writing!

~Tier

angelbear
Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

8 posted 2001-05-27 05:09 PM

I agree with all the above comments. Enjoyed this very much.

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

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