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Allstaria22
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2001-05-19 10:41 PM


if I had but one moment of your time
what would I say
would tell you how you hurt me
how you tore away my soul
how now I can not love him
because I fear too much
of how I hate your justification
of what you did
coward
that's what you are
to ignore me for so long
then reject me how I am
you mean nothing too me
yet your actions
still clutch my soul
in a unbreakable imbrace
that never lets me forget
that you
the one man who was supposed to love me most
never loved me at all.


© Copyright 2001 Dana Edmond - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-05-20 02:14 AM


Awe this brought a tear to my eye--I hope he relizes soon what a wonderful person you are b4 it's too late--great poem--LOVE ELMO<3   smile cause the whole world hurts  
zarina
Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180

2 posted 2001-05-20 05:27 AM


this was really sad. I I can sense your sorrow and I relate.


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2001-05-20 07:03 AM


I understand.


a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2001-05-20 11:13 AM


...wonderful write and I too understand completely.
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

poni
Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 21
Nebraska
5 posted 2001-05-21 02:02 AM


sorrow well penned!  (hugs)
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