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I have A Dream
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I have A Dream |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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When I look at myself in the mirror, what I see is a little girl, scared and confused, so lonesome and hurt. A girl who've been through things. Things she migth have forgotten, but they're still there.. I always bug myself whit what I should've done different, the mistakes I've made, the choises I've taken. Always think of how my life could've been.. I can't allow myself to trust, to care I can't allow myself to need, to love I want to be strong, I want to survive, to stand up all alone, to make it on my own.. Yet I have this dream, that my life was different, that I had someone to love and trust Someone who cared for me, Someone who wanted to help me. A person who loved me. Oh, Im no easy person I may be young, but still Im wise.. I may have courage, but still Im frigthned.. I may be strong, but still Im weeping.. I may act cool, but inside Im screaming.. I may be brave, but still Im stumbling.. ..And I feel so very alone.. Again, excuse my typos.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh hon, sometimes believing in yourself (fully) is the hardest thing we can ever achieve, and perhaps our greatest achievement? I myself and most others doubt ourselves too, but I have found nothing in life happens or even has a chance to work until you can love yourself. You are sensitive and wise I can see that from this post, and that in itself is a few reasons to love yourself. Don't mean this to sound like a lecture, it comes from caring. Why not write me a poem about the good in you, what you do love about yourself? There is so much I'm sure you are just on a low this evening.. Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
The poem itself is very good, But I feel sad. How can you say: "Yet I have this dream, that my life was different..."? I believe dreams can become true, don't you? About the rest, perfect, I loved the end. "Oh, Im no easy person I may be young, but still Im wise.. I may have courage, but still Im frigthned.. I may be strong, but still Im weeping.. I may act cool, but inside Im screaming.. I may be brave, but still Im stumbling.." Thanks for sharing. Don't forget: "Life returns what you ask for". Don't worry: It's easy to comment your poem, but sometimes, well, it's better not to read my owns. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
thank you both for responding! And don't worry about me..I was kinda down when I wrote this poem.Im feel better now,but still Im not really fine. I know that Im no bad person really..  And I belive I'll be just fine..Someday not so far away [This message has been edited by zarina (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And that's a really positive attitude to have Zarina... it's also good to write when we're down isn't it?? Hey - welcome to Passions...  K |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
When I look at myself in the mirror, what I see is a little girl, scared and confused, so lonesome and hurt. And so it seems at the moment..but I see a beautiful soul..and someone strong who can express how she feels..and that is a good start towards finding yourself... huggsss ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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