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zarina
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since 2001-05-19
Posts 180


0 posted 2001-05-19 02:55 PM


Im in the dark..
Evil creatures is all over me..
in my mind, and in my body..
I can here them..
I can feel them..
But I can't see them...
I don't know what to do..
Im not me anymore..
All this darkness and evil..
It makes me scared and confused..
This dark is eating me up inside..
Im losing my body.
Im losing my mind.
And Im falling..
falling into the dark.

please excuse my typos..


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-05-23 07:30 PM


These feelings are scary - tis true.  But it's up to you to transcend them and climb out of the pit with hope and faith and start again...
It's hard at times but worth the journey  

*Enlightenment is within all things*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
2 posted 2001-05-23 07:34 PM


Ah, so close to home. Been here many times, myself, my friend. Great write, I loved every word, especially the ending. Am looking forward to reading more of your work.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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