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open_cell
New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 2


0 posted 2001-05-17 05:47 AM


forget what they taught you,
it is not true
life is everything,
even when we're through.
cut through the razor
with your eyes,
lie their bleeding
breathing in lies.
pain your matchbox,
with the dream,
that everything is nothing,
not what it seams.
hold onto sense of mind,
and rational sight,
listen to their lies,
showing only fright.
the dream is not real,
nor is this life,
cut me in half
and leave all this strife.


© Copyright 2001 open_cell - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
1 posted 2001-05-17 05:58 AM


Hello my dearest, Welcolm, Tommy here . I now know why I have mist your poetry so much, I have mist that dark relavence that you always manage to capture .
We'll show the trendies hey, one day .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

open_cell
New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 2

2 posted 2001-05-17 05:59 AM


thanx tommy boy, may the force be strong in you, as strong as a very small pony!
xxx

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2001-05-17 10:56 AM


Wow Great 1st post--Welcome to passions--I'm looking forward to many more like this   LOVE ELMO <3
obscurity of cloud
Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294
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4 posted 2001-05-17 11:31 AM


There is so much eloquence voiced here.  Keep it up; great first post.   Welcome!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada
5 posted 2001-05-18 01:18 PM


HEY!!
Welkum to passions
i just joined as well and trust me...
You will ove it here!
Everyone here is nice and they are
very good at what they do
your poetry is very nice and i hope to read more of it  
have fun and don't be shy  
Luv yah!
HeAvEnS AnGeL

a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

6 posted 2001-05-20 11:17 AM


Welcome, welcome, welcome...to our world of pain, suffering, and intolerance...your words are grand and fit in so well...am awaiting more...
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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