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Isis
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0 posted 2001-05-16 08:38 PM


Everything in life,
Stems and comes from what we do,
Our friend or foe Karma,
A gentle reminder, that will see us through.

I like doing good deeds,
Going that little further,
Making a little effort,
So people will feel better.

A poster saying
'Believe in yourself,
As I believe in you!'
For a shy little girl who has no faith in herself.

A word of praise,
For the little boy,
Who doubts he can do it,
Spreading a little joy.

Some words of love,
To a friend who's doubting himself,
Who believes everything will go wrong,
Who's life seems 'suspended' on a shelf.

Sharing another's sorrow,
When times are tough,
It costs nothing,
And can never be too much.

But some say I'm wrong,
That it's a waste of time,
They should know what they are capable of,
Hell, they are in their prime!!

That I give to much,
There will be nothing left when needed,
That so much effort,
Is probably not really heeded.

I disagree!
It's important to me,
To help my friends and associates,
To remind them of all there is to see.

It used to be an effort,
I'm the first to admit,
Now it's truly a part of my nature,
The shoe - it seems to fit!

I like knowing I made a little difference,
Someone's day had a little bright spark,
That there is light, love and beauty in this world,
Not just an empty tunnel of dark.

Perhaps they condemn,
What they are too lazy to do?
It must be wonderful to be so mighty,
Needing no one to help you through.

I pity those that don't understand,
That have never seen mankind's light,
For they will inevitably end up,
Cold and alone with no comfort in sight.

So, I shall continue,
With my caring and loving ways,
Sharing that spark of hope and love,
For the rest of my days.....

*Enlightenment is within all things*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



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DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21
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1 posted 2001-05-17 05:26 PM


hey this was good.....and im glad there are people like you still out there   it feels good to be encouraged   great job

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

Isis
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2 posted 2001-05-17 09:00 PM


I try  

*Enlightenment is within all things*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Sven
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3 posted 2001-05-18 09:44 PM


and you succeed my friend. . .

this is great!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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4 posted 2001-05-18 10:05 PM


i like it... i really like it... i didn't expect to see it in "Dark Passions," but hey.... gold gleams the same if found in a coal mine  
-napalm


I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

Isis
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5 posted 2001-05-19 12:29 PM


Thanks Sven I hope so I really do..
Naplam, for want of a better title    By rights I suppose it shouldn't be in dark but the negativity in it is dark to me, darkness is not only blood and guts or hatred...
Isis

*Enlightenment is within all things*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



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