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0 posted 2001-05-15 04:58 PM


You clap-
Without conformation,

You smile-
Without acknowledgement,

You speak-
Without thoughts,

You laugh-
Without willingness,

You live-
Without  questions,

You die-
Without life.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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1 posted 2001-05-15 07:20 PM


Paradoxixal thoughts huh...I like...

K

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2 posted 2001-05-15 07:22 PM


thank you for the response. Just a little piece to get people thinking.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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3 posted 2001-05-15 10:37 PM


it worked....i'm thinking...i like this,i like the simplicity,and the truth...well expressed!!

sammi

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2001-05-16 11:11 AM


this was great--gave me chills   LOVE ELMO <3
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5 posted 2001-05-16 05:34 PM


I am glad that it gave you chills.

Without your lips,
i will not be bliss  

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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