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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
A whistling bird The croak of the frog Is what can be heard When you're lost in a fog The silence is deafening Fraught with a chill It robs you of everything Even your will But still you forge on With courage and might To coming of dawn And the first rays of light The light it will heal The scars that you bore The clouds that conceal Will now be no more So carry on proudly And shed not a tear Yell triumph so loudly You've nothing to fear Do drink of your wine For your battle is won And with this last line My story is done G. A. WEBB Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
So nice to see a bit of light in what otherwise could be termed a dark valley... well done Sir.... |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Decaflame: Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked this piece. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What a nice inspiring piece! Thanks hon  Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
and just as i say "i want more," lo and behold i find it..... very hopeful, and very well expressed. you have a great ability to convey emotion through words. -napalm
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