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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-05-13 11:12 PM



I emerged from
The dark lonely place

I felt the warm rays
Of a heavenly father's love

I am your true father
I heard him say
I will always love you
Come what may

How could you love me?
I'm just spit
In my father's eyes

Child, I'm the perfect father
I love my children
No matter what they do.

How can I trust you
To mean what you say
Just hold onto my hand
I will show you the way


© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-14 01:23 AM


i liked the way to discribe such things...i liekd this one also as i did the first part...keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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