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Dark Poetry #3

Death of Shadows

Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-12 11:37 AM

Lonely Shadow, after discussion in the moderator forum it's been decided that your poem breaches our guidelines concerning poetry that offers suicide as a viable option.

If you need to refresh your knowledge of our guidelines the link is below:

/pip/guidelines/rules.html#Suicide

If you have any questions please feel free to email

Severn

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

1 posted 2001-05-12 10:03 PM

I read this more as script, imagining the author penning his world down on paper, the darkness, anger and fears. I want more, wanting to keep reading at what this subject sees, hears, feels, how these tauntings are transforming his outlook on life and how he will carry on or fail. Thinking of making this a multiple piece? Would be great to read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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