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I Came Here Alone, part II
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I Came Here Alone, part II |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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I Came Here Alone, part II How to construct a life from that? from rejection before I could know what it was from the disappointment of your voice before I could understand it retold again and again as the introduction of a life as the defining tale of two lives ruined so little said so much destroyed (who led you to believe that you were owed anything anything at all even a life?) save your disrespect for whom it may be deserved but not for me I did nothing I did nothing to you mother Krawdad 05.10.01 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
e...this just floored me....will e ya later, k? I can relate. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Wow!! Part one framed the pain, and part two, pounds a 16d framing nail right through the reader's forehead.  "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ouch indeed..ouch ouch ouch..really powerful stuff...((((krawdad)))) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
serenity, thanks for stoppin by, e me anytime coyote, hope there wasn't too much bleeding. . . Severn, thanks for the read . . . watch out for part III Krawdad |
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