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Crucifix New Member
since 2001-05-07
Posts 4 |
Love and light,nevermore. Shadows come with the morn. My heart deepen in despair. Love wafts away like tendrals of air. I am alone, my heart tis barren. Feast away lonliness, foul beast of carrion. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was very short, but I did enjoy how it was put together. I admire your ability to cram this all into such a small space and still get the point across. Welcome to Passions in Poetry! I hope to see you reading, replying and posting more in the future too!  ~Allan (or your pal ¤Çhå®m £ø®Ð¤  )Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed this much as well...loved the imagery of the feast of carrion. Looking forward to reading more from you! In fact, I liked this so much, would be very interested in writing WITH you---I know, I'm presumptious, but that's how I YAM...LOL..welcome to passions!!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family..I certainly think you've entered with a very good poem. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email!  |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Short and Sweet! And i thought it was great! Darkly beautiful.. I must sound morbid! But hey, Welcome! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Welcome, welcome, welcome... to our world or darkness and dispair... wonderful first post and will be awaiting more of your words... Until...ali "There is an alter ego which |
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