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Facing myself
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Facing myself |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I dream of things Which will come true, If only I plan To work them through, I set up rules And decide to follow, Society’s routine, Is such a damn hollow, I create ideas In thought of pursuit, Leaving them half done, Feeling my life’s through, I write this rhymes To waste some time, While not following, The routine chime, I made up this place, In which I lay rest, Until the day ends, Till the next one begins. In the shade of the night, I look at my goals Seeing if they are real, Or only empty bowls. Once again I descend, To the path that seems right, Where I might end up, I might know tonight, I feel lost at times, When everything seems right, The signals are clear, But my mind doesn’t bite, I think quite in excess , Causing a bit of ruckus, Leaving myself to blame, Painting with the same brush. When you look at me, Remember I see two, One is myself And the other is you. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Facing ourselves is one of the hardest things we can do! It is hard and confusing but we usually get there in the end.. Love the closing a question within a question.. Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
sometimes the hardest thing to do is face ourselves excellent writing here. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I thank you for the compliments and your responses. I liked the ending myself too. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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