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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2001-05-02 07:03 PM


Hypocrisy reigns here,
A fickle nature resides in your heart.

When I met you,
You promised that you were true.

You swore you wouldn't hurt me,
You swore that you cared.

All you claimed to be,
Just fabrication in your mind.

All over now,
But I will survive on my own.

You are gone,
But you've taught me so much...

If I knew then, what I know now,
I'd do it all over again.

The pain I feel, has a purpose,
And wiser now am I.

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-03 07:22 PM


great poem...jenn..
i personally liked these lines
"When I met you,
You promised that you were true"
cause that line is so real..
i related to this poems in some sense..
great job and i'm glad that you are now posting again in dark passions..cya~

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Isis
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2 posted 2001-05-03 09:34 PM


Good on ya!  For chalking it up to experience, i know it hurts all the same though!  Power to you hon! *hugs*  
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Zyell
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3 posted 2001-05-04 04:09 PM


the pain I feel has a purpose! very wise words, for one so young! I enjoyed this!


*S*

Z

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-05-04 10:34 PM


Thanks guys! Glad you liked it...

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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5 posted 2001-05-05 04:36 AM


Yes! You will survive, and I'm sure you will grow and blossom as well. well done, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


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