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Blaec
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

0 posted 2001-04-30 08:05 PM

     I've given into sin and back again.
Then given in once more.  But every time
I go down that road I come back stronger
than before.

     It's true that I've got holes in my
flesh and ink in my skin.  Did you  ever
stop to wonder about the person that I
am within?

     So I ask you now Miss Holier than
thou, are  you claiming to be a saint?
I'll be the first to gladly tell you
if you think you are, you ain't.

     I read somewhere 'thou shall not
pass judgment', I think it was in
The Book.  That's right i've read it.
Now go away and take that condemning
look.

(stilll working on this one!)

[This message has been edited by Blaec (edited 04-30-2001).]

Dedreia
Member

since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

1 posted 2001-04-30 11:26 PM

Send that person packin!! lol...I like the way you are going with this. Keep working on it!!

Dee

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

2 posted 2001-04-30 11:32 PM

my my my,this was profound,i relate so very much although not specifically to
"It's true that I've got holes in my
flesh and ink in my skin. Did you ever
stop to wonder about the person that I
am within?"
it's the sentiment i share,this is a very good peice,incredibly enjoyable to read and just overall well done,if there are improvements to be made i can't spot them!!

samantha¤

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

Blaec
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

3 posted 2001-05-01 08:50 PM

Thank you both for taking the time to share your thoughts on this. I was a little unsure of it. Now I'm not! Thanks again!

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2001-05-03 09:22 PM

We all sin, it is only the good and the thinking that admit it!!

And those that don't with their holier than thou are only to be pitied. Karma brings everyone's just deserts one day...
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2001-05-05 04:34 AM

I don't think I've ever met anyone who hasn't sinned!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

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