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Broken_Heart
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since 2000-07-24

Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2001-04-30 07:28 PM

My feelings are twisted
I don't anything anymore
I know I love you
Yet you're out of reach

I stare at you
And listen to your voice
I even touch your hand
But you're not there

I still wonder why
Why love played a trick
Why it showed me
That you're real

Now I know
That an angel walks
Among us yet
I can't reach you

I can only hope
I can only dream
Yet in my heart I know
We'll never be together...

© Copyright 2001 Jean Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved

Blaec
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

1 posted 2001-04-30 08:06 PM

Nice writing!
Doesn't it seem like we
always want the one that's
out of reach?

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2001-05-01 02:24 AM

I know this feeling so very well, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

3 posted 2001-05-01 06:49 PM

The feeling in here is much like what I feel. I hope you keep writing as I think it helps to cope. Good Luck, Dee

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

Jenn Cirrincione

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Posts 2107
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4 posted 2001-05-03 03:28 PM

Oh, I can relate to this!!!
Nice writing.

jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-03 07:14 PM

a well..written poem..
great job..
i enjoyed this poem alot
keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

6 posted 2001-05-04 10:42 PM

nicely written, and i understand your feelings

Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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