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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State 
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Taken Away. Too young to die. So many questions. Wondering why. Emptiness inside. I can't gain control. No explaination, for the life he stole. Pain in my heart. Trying to hold on. I don't understand. He did nothing wrong. Tears in my eyes. I can't clearly see. How could this happen? How could this be? Someone explain. I can't comprehend. He can't be gone. Too soon to end. So many questions. Wondering why. Taken away. Too young to die. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great write. I wonder why not response? I really enjoyed it very much. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This was good, really good, it made me cry, i have felt this feeling before and it is so hard  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Thank you both for your replies. I wrote this at a very hard time in my life. I'm glad that ya'll liked it. [This message has been edited by Blaec (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very profound questions asked in a poem with deep emotion, well written with style and I liked it. Thanks for sharing, Regards, Olias. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very moving and so well written. It touched my heart, deeply. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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