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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"ego-antichrist" insolence browses bulemic grasses of conceit grown to gorge the bovine beast of self-importance chewing blades of bitterness swallowing the narcotic chlorophyll of arrogance squeezed from envious greens harvesting troglodyte seals from their cyberian portals widow nurtured weeds in the manured corners of respondent corrals where the sewage of ignorance seeps into polluted wells of bliss communal drinkers of commiseration covetously swilling the nascent effervescence of his hydrochloric leach an ego-antichrist bearing a cross of himself dispersing narcissistic dogma via mind-vomited grace [This message has been edited by coyote (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
ooooh this is a good one,i like the last stanza best,this has alot of intensity,well done once again. You've used an interesting theme/analogy,i enjoyed the read. sam¤ much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Sammi. The horror phase continues. Glad ya liked it.  "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I liked this poetry. How you use the functions of the tree. If I may make one suggestions, do not use big words. Keep it simple and your message with still be heard. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
ThanksRonilforyourreplyandforreading. Now that's a big word. "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
hmmm i liked the big words?!!*^ |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Me too, Sami. "Language is a virus" William S. Burroughs "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." coyote [This message has been edited by coyote (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great....lottabigwords! I enjoyed this one though. Very well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Hey thanks, Javier. "Perhaps a "self-portrait", he said at the risk of being ostentatious, I haven't really decided yet." "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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amyX Junior Member
since 2001-04-02
Posts 32 |
I did not need a dictionary which can only mean I understood every word and appreciate the images you share "the bovine beast of self-importance" in the beginning, I knew it was cool "dispersing narcisstic dogma" and in the wnd, it was cooler. amyX Victims, aren't we all? |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
I'm certain you didn't, Amy. Glad ya liked it, and good to see ya back. "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
well I am impressed.. I thought a knack with metaphors I take my hat off and salute you. enjoyed alot, "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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