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OLIAS
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0 posted 2001-04-27 03:47 PM



I Fear the doll


In the corner of my room,
There is a line twixt light and gloom,
And perched in velvet finery,
Mary Anne, she waits for me,
Watching, watching glassy eyes,
Never sleeping, open wide,
I peek at her from in my bed,
Her blood red lips and ivory head,
Biding time 'til I can keep,
No longer from a fitful sleep,
For if I slumber, then I'm sure,
From darkness 'cross my bedroom floor,
The pitter pat of tiny feet,
Those china hands upon my sheet,
She'll claw and scrape until she stands,
My heaving throat within her hands,
Then crush the very life from me,
There's no escape from such as she,
So here I cower at midnights toll,
I dare not sleep, I fear the doll.


Olias

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Swamp¤Faeryie
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1 posted 2001-04-28 03:54 PM


interesting..........i like the style you've written it in...very very interesting.

sam

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

Blaec
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2 posted 2001-04-28 08:46 PM


I really enjoyed this.  I'll never look at a china doll the same again!
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3 posted 2001-04-29 02:36 AM


preety scary tale. You have a mind like mine. Thanks for the great work.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

OLIAS
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4 posted 2001-04-29 05:49 AM


Swampfaeryie,
Thank you for your kind reply I'm glad you liked.

Blaec,
Oops, now I've done it you have the same phobia as me, thanks for your reply.

Xeonox,
Your very kind, I'm also uneasy about clown dolls, but thats another story (lol)

Regards to you all,
Olias.

Severn
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5 posted 2001-04-29 05:52 AM


Scary..it really is lol..

scary scary scary...

K

OLIAS
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6 posted 2001-04-29 11:34 AM


Thanks Servern, not sure your talking about me or the poem, probably both scary scary scary lol.

Regards,
Olias.

coyote
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7 posted 2001-04-29 05:41 PM


Olias, this is excellent paranoia.
I really liked it.
Missed this somehow, but I just  can't read everything. lol  

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

Isis
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8 posted 2001-04-29 07:38 PM


Reminds me of the clown in the Poltergeist movie.  Scary when our imagination runs away from us!!
Well done  

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



OLIAS
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9 posted 2001-04-29 09:51 PM


Coyote,
Thanks for the read, I know how you feel its hard to keep up.

Isis,
Yep, I dont like the clown thing either, not much hope for me. Thanks for your kind words.

Regards to you both
Olias.

Severn
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10 posted 2001-04-30 06:52 AM


(it reminded me of Chucky)
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